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Wednesday, June 6, 2012

Sandra's Writers Workshop Hop- Hot Hot Hot

http://sandrasfiberworks.blogspot.com/2012/05/having-taught-fiction-writing-for-years.html


I smelled him before he even entered the room. Face turning red, hot feelings over my body, I knew I was drooling. Sitting in my chair waiting impatiently for him to enter the room I tried my best to contain myself.

Cowboy hat on his head, he looked calm, peaceful, and ready to be here in the moment. Clip Clop Clip Clop into the room he swaggered. I took a deep breath and let his presence sink into my being. Standing in front of all of us he talked.

The album inspired by life he stated. Rough times and pain brings in awareness. I hope you all find the album peaceful and moving. I am entranced by the tone of his voice. I'm never going to forget this moment as long as I live. I listen as he plays for all of us in this small room called a studio.

I could die today and feel content. I feel hot since he is so hot.



9 comments:

  1. well written and I could feel it.
    However what I really want to say when I read it is.....Lucky shit! :-)

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    1. Margaret,
      You made me giggle. I know right.... Lucky me....

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  2. Oh, this is awesome!! I feel like I am right there with you!! Turn on the fan, I feel the heat! Brilliant.

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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    1. Kathy
      Bring on that fan and NOW.... Hee

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  3. I can see him in my mind. Great story!

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  4. oooh, yes a "close" first person narrative, all right! I'm fanning myself as I write. To make it closer, you could write it so we really hear her voice -- get to know her as well as a character as we do him. As he certainly has quite a presence! Glad you linked up!

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    1. Sandra
      Thanks for the tutelage. Next time more about the other character. Fun.

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  5. Wow! He is hot! :-) I also wrote one myself --http://journeyofmylifendestiny.blogspot.com/2012/06/i-believe-that-if-we-meet-once-we-are.html

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